FMP - second practice shoot.

Hi guys. I have now done my second practice shoot, the shoot went okay I guess but I know full well I could of done much better. This photoshoot took place at the models house which perhaps is the reason why it never went so well?
The equipment I used for this shoot was, a Black muslin cloth (Not very good quality what so ever) it had loads of crease marks all over it and there was no way of ironing these out. I used two tripods with the pole going across for the muslin cloth to sit on. The reason I had to use a muslin cloth was because I do not own a black back drop. I only own a white and pink one which I didnt want to have to completely edit the backgrounds on them.
Even though the technical side of things did not go so well, the poses went well which I could counteract the bad side of things with.

 

I have selected three images from the contact sheets that I liked and edited them with silver effex, I think the silver effex has worked really well on these images, the only let down was the background I had to work with.

Thanks for reading about my second practice shoot, what did you think? let me know.